I was waiting for this to come out! I normally don't do horror at all, but I just loved the concept. (I hope itch. doesn't start recommend horror games to me since I downloaded this! :P)
Anyway, I LOVE the art style. The art was so whimsical that it suited it perfectly. I like the formula and how easy it is to die (you barely need a guide, haha.) It made me think that I could definitely do a game like that. :P I liked that there were three different protagonists.
The music was also excellent!
Now the romance progressed a bit quickly for me but that's understandable though, since NaNo. If I could say anything, I would say that a proofreader would've been a good thing to have. There were quite a few punctuation issues that didn't make the writing bad, but did make the writing less legible. Generally speaking, I think the protagonists were a little too similar to each other and I think the quiz should've been different (only in the sense that some of the options were clearly paired with a protagonist and therefore too linear.)
Hahaha, yeah, most of the bad end answers are preeeetty obvious. =P
Yeah, romance is a bit fast since each date takes place within a day. (Heck, just a few hours really.) And dang it, just shows that Word is terrible at its job. (Amiralo and I went through the script so much gah.)
The 3 girls were originally just one person. The decision to make them different people came way later. (And at that point I was too exhausted to rewrite the story since it was already done and needed to start on bgs. So them being the same-ish is my bad.) As for the quiz, I didn't want to put those generic questions. So obvious answers it was hahahaha.
Thanks for the advice! I'll keep it in mind next time I write a story and work on a new vn.
Hello i got the twins good end but i cant seem to get the mermaid's good end its always the bad end or the worst end and the guide is confusing since the guide says 3 choices when we only have 2
Ok I haven't fully explored it yet but I kind of need to ask... this game does have 'good' endings, right? Because so far doing all the right stuff ends with me getting the 'worst end' type endings and there doesn't seem to be a way to stop it (other than getting myself a bad end earlier).
Just finished this and oh wow wow wow. I want /more/. I want to find out more about the MCIP! Will you be doing more games along this idea? Although it was a little concerning how easy it was to get yourself killed. XD Naturally I had to explore them all just to see how they each individually lose it on her, and I like how doing so usually reveals more information you may not otherwise get. Makes getting them even better. Loved the game!
Glad you enjoyed it so much! I might create another story taking place in this world. Whether it'll be another vn or a novel itself, is another thing. (But I am considering "continuing" this. Only more focused on the MCIP itself then the blind dates hahaha.) And yes, those mythical creatures are easy to offend. XF Really fills me with joy when others are satisfied with what I create~ Really helped when Amiralo edited the story. Gave it more oomph!
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I was waiting for this to come out! I normally don't do horror at all, but I just loved the concept. (I hope itch. doesn't start recommend horror games to me since I downloaded this! :P)
Anyway, I LOVE the art style. The art was so whimsical that it suited it perfectly. I like the formula and how easy it is to die (you barely need a guide, haha.) It made me think that I could definitely do a game like that. :P I liked that there were three different protagonists.
The music was also excellent!
Now the romance progressed a bit quickly for me but that's understandable though, since NaNo. If I could say anything, I would say that a proofreader would've been a good thing to have. There were quite a few punctuation issues that didn't make the writing bad, but did make the writing less legible. Generally speaking, I think the protagonists were a little too similar to each other and I think the quiz should've been different (only in the sense that some of the options were clearly paired with a protagonist and therefore too linear.)
Good job completing NaNo!
Hahaha, yeah, most of the bad end answers are preeeetty obvious. =P
Yeah, romance is a bit fast since each date takes place within a day. (Heck, just a few hours really.) And dang it, just shows that Word is terrible at its job. (Amiralo and I went through the script so much gah.)
The 3 girls were originally just one person. The decision to make them different people came way later. (And at that point I was too exhausted to rewrite the story since it was already done and needed to start on bgs. So them being the same-ish is my bad.) As for the quiz, I didn't want to put those generic questions. So obvious answers it was hahahaha.
Thanks for the advice! I'll keep it in mind next time I write a story and work on a new vn.
Hello i got the twins good end but i cant seem to get the mermaid's good end its always the bad end or the worst end and the guide is confusing since the guide says 3 choices when we only have 2
The 3rd choice is letting the timer run out. 0 = Do nothing.
oohhh okay got it, thanks!
You're welcome!
Ok I haven't fully explored it yet but I kind of need to ask... this game does have 'good' endings, right? Because so far doing all the right stuff ends with me getting the 'worst end' type endings and there doesn't seem to be a way to stop it (other than getting myself a bad end earlier).
You have to let the timer run out. And yes, there are 3 good endings total. =3
Ah, I see! Thank you very much.
You're welcome!
Just finished this and oh wow wow wow. I want /more/. I want to find out more about the MCIP! Will you be doing more games along this idea? Although it was a little concerning how easy it was to get yourself killed. XD Naturally I had to explore them all just to see how they each individually lose it on her, and I like how doing so usually reveals more information you may not otherwise get. Makes getting them even better. Loved the game!
Glad you enjoyed it so much! I might create another story taking place in this world. Whether it'll be another vn or a novel itself, is another thing. (But I am considering "continuing" this. Only more focused on the MCIP itself then the blind dates hahaha.) And yes, those mythical creatures are easy to offend. XF Really fills me with joy when others are satisfied with what I create~ Really helped when Amiralo edited the story. Gave it more oomph!